Today I’m thrilled to have debut author Kathryn Purdie
and her editor Maria Barbo, who is at Katherine Tegen Books, here to share about the author/editor
relationship. Kathryn’s YA fantasy BURNING GLASS has gotten fantastic reviews,
and I can’t wait to read it.
Here’s a blurb from Goodreads:
Kathryn Purdie |
Tasked with sensing the intentions of would-be assassins, Sonya is under constant pressure to protect the emperor. But Sonya’s power is untamed and reckless, and she can’t always decipher when other people’s impulses end and her own begin. In a palace full of warring emotions and looming darkness, Sonya fears that the biggest danger to the empire may be herself.
As she struggles to wrangle her abilities, Sonya seeks refuge in her tenuous alliances with the charming-yet-volatile Emperor Valko and his idealistic younger brother, Anton, the crown prince. But when threats of revolution pit the two brothers against each other, Sonya must choose which brother to trust—and which to betray.
Hi Kathryn and Maria! Thanks so much for joining us.
1.
I don’t know much about the submission to publisher process, and I bet others
are confused too. Did you two have any e-mail or phone conversations while
Kathryn’s book was on submission before an agreement was entered into and what
were each of you looking for from the other in your communications? What should
aspiring authors discuss in these important conversations?
Kathryn and Maria |
Kathryn:
My
agent, Josh Adams, handled 99.9% of the submissions process. There were 3-4
editors (I can’t remember anymore!) who wanted BURNING GLASS, so I did get the opportunity
to have a few conversations before I finally accepted Maria’s offer from
Katherine Tegen Books/HarperCollins. (That was my .1% part of the process.)
What I was looking for in an editor was her clear
vision of my story and how to tackle it in edits. Of course, I also wanted her
to love it and be enthusiastic about championing it at her publishing house. I
got that perfect package with Maria. When we chatted, we immediately clicked,
and she understood the deep psychology of all my characters and how to make
their nuances more apparent on the page. And when she compared a scene in my
book to one of my favorite episodes of BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER, I knew she was
my dream editor, and that was that!
Maria: I
loved that Kathryn was a Joss Whedon fan because it gave us common ground from
which to start our conversations about storytelling, series arcs, and creating
a strong heroine with a solid support network of friends. We were lucky. We had
a shorthand from the beginning so that if one of us was ever trying to explain
something to the other we could always say, “You know how in Buffy when she
came back from the dead and…”
But I think that initial phone call is all about
getting a feel for whether or not you think you can work together. Do you get a
good feeling from your editor? Does she seem like someone you can work with? Does
her vision of the project or the way she talks about the project ring true to
you? Do you have similar ways of talking about storytelling? Get a feel for the
editor’s style, and be your true self.
2.
Many authors—especially debut ones—say that they dreaded the first editorial
letter from their editor. Share a bit about the first editorial letter for
BURNING GLASS. What advice do you have for debut authors about to get their
first letter from their editor?
Kathryn:
I
actually LOVED my editorial letter! Maybe it’s because I got it within a month
of the offer on the trilogy, so I was still in that honeymoon phase. I didn’t
need to process it at all. I just dug right into the work, and it went pretty
smoothly. Maria and I did have a few phone calls to clarify some things, but,
all in all, it a pretty painless process.
Then a year later I got my editorial letter for the
second book in the trilogy…and that was so much harder! For one thing, book
two’s are just crazy difficult, and I was also a little run down from a very
intense year of editing book one and drafting book two. But I still completely
agreed with Maria’s amazing notes and her suggestions to help me discover the
book I am trying to write. (I’m still in revisions right now.) I realized this
would involve A LOT of rewriting, which was overwhelming because my books are
long, and I’m not super speedy.
Kathryn gave Maria this plaque after slipping up and calling her "my emperor" instead of "my editor." It's been a joke ever since. |
Thankfully, Maria has been in my corner all along.
She’s given me more time when needed and chatted with me again and again on the
phone and through emails to make sure I have everything in my arsenal to tackle
this daunting project. I’m extremely grateful to her and feel I’m in the best
hands. My book two is going to be great, thanks to her guidance.
Maria: I
like the image you’ve got going of me as boxing coach! I’m totally smiling
right now. Editors love knowing when our authors find our letters helpful. We
also feel vulnerable when we send out that first edit letter to a new author.
A former colleague once
described an edit letters as a conversation starter and I use that phrase all
the time now. I always try to remind my authors that an edit letter is just the
beginning of longer process.
My favorite part of the
process is the post-letter phone conversation in which we hash out all the
details and concerns, and basically nerd out over storytelling. I usually try
to give an author time to process the feedback, kvetch about me to their BFF,
and figure out what they think about the points I’ve made before we schedule a
call. I love love—and I had this
experience with Kathryn—when I give some feedback and an author says, “I see
what you’re saying. I don’t know if I totally agree with you, but I’ve been
thinking about what might be making that scene/moment/chapter feel off and this
is what I think.” We’re here to elevate each other.
I listen to a lot of Alec
Balwin’s podcast, “Here’s the Thing” and in this week’s podcast, he talks to
Micky O’Rourke who raves about the director he worked with on THE WRESTLER.
Mickey relates how he’d perform a scene and give it everything he had and
afterwards Darren Aronofsky would say, “Okay, that was good. Let’s do it again
and give it more this time.” In some ways, being an editor is like being a
director. It’s my job to get Kathryn to dig deeper but, of course, there’s a
fine line between fussing too much with something and pushing an author to do
her best. I’m still working on it.
3.
Did you have any challenges or different approaches as you worked on revisions
to BURNING GLASS? How did you work them out?
Kathryn:
See
above! :-) Maria can probably tell you how she’s had to talk me off a couple
ledges. She always tells me it’s going to be okay and to write without anxiety!
My book IS about a character who gets overwhelmed when she has too much to
process…Sonya *may* have that in common with me. But the advice Maria has told
me that has helped the most is how to find what’s at the core of fixing a
scene—or the whole book, for that matter—and that often has to do with the
characters’ driving motivations. Maria will compare something in my story to a
scene or character from BUFFY or another TV show or a painting or something
really tangible like that—something I can really latch onto—and it just opens
up my mind, and I see the solution.
Maria: Yes,
I speak in stories. I also like to send articles—snippets of things I hear in
the news that relate to our characters. Don’t forget about those!
I went to graduate school
for painting so I have a very intimate relationship with the sort of anxiety
that surrounds the creative process and the vulnerability it requires. And I
know that if you don’t separate out creative brain from editing brain, editing
brain won’t let you get any work done. Kathryn likes to pull marathon writing
sessions and I’m always telling her to stop and go for a walk to rest her brain
and give the ideas some space to piece themselves together.
4.
What advice do you have for authors on handling these different approaches or
conflicts with their editors?
Kathryn: I
believe in honest communication. I think that’s critical in any healthy
relationship, and I’m grateful I feel comfortable enough with Maria that I can
share any editorial concerns I have with her directly. She gives me a safe
place to do that. The only big concern I’ve ever had is having enough time to
do the work…everything else we’ve run into has just been little clarifications or
me bouncing new suggestions off of her. I know many authors who don’t have such
an open dialogue with their editors, or whose editors don’t make themselves
available to them, and I think I’d be a basket case (or more of one!) if I
didn’t have that with Maria. Again, I’m super grateful for her!
Maria:
I
second honesty. KP expressed her concern about not having enough time to write
early on, which I very much appreciated, and because of that I was able to do
everything I could to buy her more time.
I would also keep in mind that your editor is on your
team and you both have the same goals: to make the book the best it can be and
get it into the hands of as many readers as possible. Keeping that in mind
makes disagreements easier to sort out.
The best tips I ever learned about conflict resolution
is that the anticipation of a difficult conversation is often worse than the
actual conversation, so it’s helpful to address concerns as soon as you can. Editors
and writers both tend to have strong introverted tendencies and most of us
don’t enjoy conflict. Chances are, if you address the disagreement directly in
a non-defensive, non-accusatory way, the other person will be responsive.
And if you and your editor reach an impasse on
something you feel strongly about, loop in your agent—not to take sides but as
an objective third party. Agents know the industry and they know you. Often
they can see both perspectives and help reach a resolution.
5.
Kathryn had a different title for BURNING GLASS when her manuscript was on
submission. Share how you decided on the final title for her book.
Kathryn:
My first title for this story was THE EMPATH AND THE EMPEROR. When I spoke with
my agent on the phone and told him this, I remember hearing silence on the
other end of the line, so I promptly said, “I’ll think of something better!” I
soon came up with AURASEER, which is my word for the type of empath Sonya is,
and it’s a term that’s still used in the book. The sales team found that word
confusing as a title, however, so Maria came up with THE SEER’S CURSE. But then
the sales team felt that skewed too high-tween rather than young adult, so
Maria had a brainstorming session with the editorial team and came up with
BURNING GLASS—which is perfect! I’ll let Maria tell you why she chose it.
Maria: I
love the inherent contradiction in BURNING GLASS. As a title, it evokes a
strong mental image. It’s also inspired by an image in the book, which is often
a helpful tip when you’re stumped on a title. I can’t remember the exact line
or phrase. KP, can you?
Kathryn: The context is Sonya is walking
around the burned rubble of the convent. “When the stables
swallowed him from view, I caught my reflection in a pane of broken
glass, flames still smoldering behind me.”
Maria: Yes, that’s it! I
like the way it evokes the concept of a phoenix ready to rise up out of the
ashes. The title reflects both Sonya's heated passion and simmering guilt over
the fire as well as her fear of being just a mirror without getting too
literal. It's got that winning combination of dark and pretty. Hope that wasn’t
a spoiler.
6.
How often did you communicate while working on revisions and edits? Mostly via
e-mail or phone? Did that change as the publication date neared?
Kathryn:
I’d
say we chatted maybe three to four times on the phone regarding the edits of
each book so far, and we’ve emailed anywhere from one to three times a week
over the last year. There are many rounds of edits and several discussions
about book two and the direction of the series, and Maria sometimes runs promo
copy by me and has other little updates, or I’ll have random questions.
Our communication has felt pretty constant, but I’ve
been on a fast track from the time book one sold to its publication, while
getting book two ready in the meantime. I don’t know if this rate of
communication is normal for her other authors—maybe I’m just high maintenance!
But I’m grateful for how involved Maria is in the writing process, and how
involved she lets me be in the publication process.
Maria:
You are not high maintenance! My short answer is, we communicate as needed. I
enjoy staying in touch with Kathryn while she’s revising. And I’ll often have
additional thoughts after the edit letter is sent, which is part of the reason
I like to have follow-up conversations.
I am not the sort of person who can always put my
finger on precisely why a scene isn’t working on the very first read, so I like
having the chance to continue editorial discussions. Some ideas—particularly
the psychology of a scene, have to simmer. Characters are people. Their driving
forces aren’t always immediately transparent.
And I’ll often come up with thoughts or ideas while I’m
doing something else like working out at the gym, daydreaming on the subway
platform, listening to NPR in the morning. Or sitting in a meeting. Then I’ll
get really excited and type it up on my phone so I don’t forget and send
Kathryn an email when I get back to my desk.
I know that definitely happened with book two. I was
listening to a BBC report on Tunisia and suddenly the political situation in
Riaznin came into focus.
7.
I know HarperCollins probably assigned a publicist to help Kathryn prepare for
her book release. Did you two have any conversations about marketing or the
transition Kathryn was going through from unpublished to published author?
Kathryn:
Ro
Romanello is my publicist at Katherine Tegen Books, and she’s fantastic. She’s
a big
Kathryn and Maria with the Sales & Marketing team at HarperCollins. |
Maria:
Ro
is amazing and she’s been a huge fan of the book from the very beginning. I
remember her coming into my office to gush after she read it the first time.
That doesn’t really answer your question, but we do begin having conversations
with our marketing and publicity teams early on to build excitement and brainstorm
promotional ideas.
Kathryn is also a member of The Sweet Sixteens. I
imagine it must have helped to have a community of debut writers to go through
that transition with.
8.
Do you have any other advice to authors about having a good working relationship
with an editor?
Kathryn:
It’s
good to remember your editor is a human being and knows you’re also human. Sometimes
I try too hard to be a perfectionist on all fronts and be an amazing publishing
pro, when the truth is I’m just a debut author and have a lot to learn. That’s,
again, why I advocate for being honest while being as professional as possible.
Maria is very intuitive and can see through to all my struggles, anyway, so
it’s just better to be frank about them. :-)
Maria:
Aw, you make me feel like a guru! We can all be a little too perfectionisty at
times and we all have a lot to learn—on both sides of the process.
Again, I would remember that your editor is on your team.
I wouldn’t have signed up BURNING GLASS if I hadn’t sparked to it and thought
that it was an important book for teen readers. And I’m so grateful that I get
to talk to Kathryn and have in-depth discussions about things like empathy and
emotions.
Thanks for sharing all your advice, Kathryn and Maria!
You can find Kathryn at:
Website:
www.kathrynpurdie.com
Twitter:
https://twitter.com/kathrynpurdie
Instagram:
https://www.instagram.com/kathrynpurdie/
Tumblr:
http://kathrynpurdie.tumblr.com/
You can find Maria at:
Twitter:
https://twitter.com/MariaSBarbo
Kathryn and Maria are generously offering a copy of BURNING GLASS for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower (just click the follow button if you’re not a follower) and leave a comment through April 2nd. If your e-mail is not on your Google Profile, you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest.
If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry. This giveaway is for U.S. and Canada.
Here's what's coming up:
Next Monday I have a guest post by debut author Kristy Acevedo and a giveaway of her YA science fiction CONSIDER.
The next Monday (can you believe it will be April?) I have an interview with debut author Elizabeth Briggs and a giveaway of her YA science fiction FUTURE SHOCK.
Wednesday that week I have an agent spotlight interview with Elana Roth Parker and a query critique giveaway.
The following Monday I have an interview with debut author Lindsay Eager and a giveaway of her MG magical realism HOURS OF THE BEES.
Friday that week I'll be participating in the Showers of Books Giveaway Hop!
Hope to see you on Monday!
Here's what's coming up:
Next Monday I have a guest post by debut author Kristy Acevedo and a giveaway of her YA science fiction CONSIDER.
The next Monday (can you believe it will be April?) I have an interview with debut author Elizabeth Briggs and a giveaway of her YA science fiction FUTURE SHOCK.
Wednesday that week I have an agent spotlight interview with Elana Roth Parker and a query critique giveaway.
The following Monday I have an interview with debut author Lindsay Eager and a giveaway of her MG magical realism HOURS OF THE BEES.
Friday that week I'll be participating in the Showers of Books Giveaway Hop!
Hope to see you on Monday!
33 comments:
It's great to meet Kathryn and Maria. Loved getting a look at their process. Wishing them both much success!
Thanks for the introductions, Natalie. I'll pass on the giveaway this time around. Have a good week!
sound like super ladies thanks for sharing
have a great week ahead dear
An editor is just trying to make the book better. If the author can realize that and relax, it will all come together.
It's good when author, editor, and publicist are all on the same page. hehe. Love the cover and title and it sounds like a book I'd enjoy reading.
It's good when author, editor, and publicist are all on the same page. hehe. Love the cover and title and it sounds like a book I'd enjoy reading.
How funny that when Maria compared a scene in the book to a episode of BUFFY, Kathryn knew right away Maria was the right editor. And they really do come across as a unified team here.
Sounds like a winning duo, I'm going to pass on the giveaway this time, but hope you have a lovely week Natalie.
Stories like this always make me smile. Congrats to all for making a winning team.
Great insider's perspective between an editor and author. Thanks for the interview, Maria and Katie! BURNING GLASS lives up to the hype!
Wow! That's a lot of info to share and I greatly appreciate it. I need to consider an agent in the near future. Best wishes to Kathryn and Burning Glass.
Interesting how the title changed. My second and third books didn't even have titles. Fortunately my publisher is smarter than I am.
Hi, Natalie,
Really enjoyed the interview today...Kathryn and Maria seem to have that magic chemistry we as writers are all looking for to succeed.
ALL the best with your debut novel, Kathryn!
Hi Natalie! Hi Maria! Hi Kathryn! What a great interview. Looks like a great fit for Burning Glass!
There's nothing like a great editor to help bring a book from really good, to great. Great interview, ladies :)
I was so excited to read this interview! I already had Burning Glass on my "to read" list and the info in this interview was really helpful.
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Great interview. Loved hearing about the editorial process and a successful author-editor relationship. Can't wait to read your book!
Thanks for the chance! Already follow through email :)
Cool interview! The plaque was too funny. :) Thanks for the chance! Following via email: xinyi1467 at gmail.
What a super interview and the book sounds fantastic. Best of luck with your debut Kathryn!
I've always wondered about the process so thanks for more details. It's really awesome they found each other and clicked :D Thank you for the chance!
I've had my eyes on this book since I first read about it. Thanks for the interview and chance to win. I posted on my tumblr: http://yesreaderwriterpoetmusician.tumblr.com/post/141495452662/literary-rambles-debut-author-kathryn-purdie-and
Great interview! And sounds like an incredible book! Congratulations, and thanks for the giveaway. valbodden(at)gmail(dot)com
I got to meet Kathryn once at an event at BYU-Idaho! I'm super excited to read her book.
I utterly loved the vulnerability beneath Valko's lust and burning desire for glory. Well-drawn characters, unfurled madness and sweet love under the gold-capped domes of Torchev, a compelling character-driven plot: BURNING GLASS is a wonder.
Great interview detailing parts of the process that are unfamiliar to me. I love this! (julie.k.walters@gmail.com)
This book has been on my TBR list since I first heard about it. Can't wait to read it.
What a fantastic interview! And it sounds like the author-editor relationship we all dream of.
Many thanks for the wonderful insights, but let someone else win the book, as I need to catch up on my middle grade reading.
Thisis a great glimpse into the author-editor relationship. Kathryn's book looks fantastic.
I loved reading about the author-editor relationship. I will add this book to my TBR list!
Great interview!
This book sounds like a great read!!
Thanks for the chance to win!
natasha_donohoo_8 at hotmail dot com
I'm so glad Kathryn found her perfect match with Maria! Wishing then both much success with the book! :)
So interesting to hear about their relationship and how they work together. I can't get over how quickly the edits arrived the first time. Wow! I loved hearing about how the title came about. It definitely stands out.
Nice to meet Kathryn and Maria!
~Jess
Interesting to hear about their process! I can relate to Kathryn's comments about letting ideas/problems simmer while you are trying to sort them out. Looking forward to backtracking and reading other interviews :-)
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