Happy Wednesday Everyone! Today I have debut author Chloe Gong here to share about her YA fantasy These Violent Delights. I’m super excited to read it because it’s set in 1926 Shanghai.
Here’s a blurb from Goodreads:
Perfect for fans of The Last Magician and Descendant of the Crane, this heart-stopping debut is an imaginative Romeo and Juliet retelling set in 1920s Shanghai, with rival gangs and a monster in the depths of the Huangpu River.
The year is 1926, and Shanghai hums to the tune of debauchery.
A blood feud between two gangs runs the streets red, leaving the city helpless in the grip of chaos. At the heart of it all is eighteen-year-old Juliette Cai, a former flapper who has returned to assume her role as the proud heir of the Scarlet Gang—a network of criminals far above the law. Their only rivals in power are the White Flowers, who have fought the Scarlets for generations. And behind every move is their heir, Roma Montagov, Juliette’s first love…and first betrayal.
But when gangsters on both sides show signs of instability culminating in clawing their own throats out, the people start to whisper. Of a contagion, a madness. Of a monster in the shadows. As the deaths stack up, Juliette and Roma must set their guns—and grudges—aside and work together, for if they can’t stop this mayhem, then there will be no city left for either to rule.
Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!
- YALLWrite Festival: The YALLWrite Festival is a free conference on November 13th and 14th presented by Fierce Reads. There are some awesome classes and panels that can benefit writers even if you don't write in MG or YA.
- WriteOnCon: WriteOnCon is coming February 19-21, 2021. This conference is low cost--less than $50--and is jam packed with panels and classes. They also have presentations by agents, and some of them represent adult authors too. They offer a lot of other benefits, like paid critiques and groups where you can get feedback on your manuscript or query from other conference members.
Hi Chloe! Thanks
so much for joining us.
1. Tell us about yourself and how you became a writer.
Thanks so much for
having me here! I’m a YA author and a senior at the University of Pennsylvania.
I’m originally from New Zealand, but now I’m here in the States studying English
and International Relations. I first started writing in high school, mostly
just as a hobby to occupy my time. I was an avid reader, and I tore through my
piles borrowed from the library at frightening fast speed. When I was short of
good reading material, I decided to start telling my own stories just as a way
to pass time. Because I didn’t take myself very seriously (I was 14, after all)
I wrote incredibly fast, pumping out manuscript after manuscript that had no
purpose except to tell a semi-incoherent first draft story. From there, eight
manuscripts later, my craft kept growing and developing to bring me where I am
today!
These Violent Delights started from two separate puzzle pieces. First, I was really interested in the
concept of a blood feud, and what sort of story I could draw forward from that. I had this image in my head of two families at war, and star-crossed lovers who are forced to choose sides, except they have a certain bitterness toward each other too because of the circumstances they have been slotted into. The second puzzle piece was about the 1920s, because I adored the aesthetic, but I was tired of seeing the setting being used without engaging with the colonial and racial tensions of that time. Eventually, those two things clicked together, and I thought I could tell a story about a blood feud set in the 1920s, grappling with both the question of hatred between two equal groups, and then hatred from exterior groups when oppression and imperialism are in play.
Once I knew I was
telling a story about star-crossed lovers and a blood feud, I also knew I
wanted to engage directly with Romeo and Juliet, because that’s the very
touchstone text about star-crossed lovers and blood feuds! Instead of circling
around the play’s themes and trying to insist on my originality, I decided to embrace
the idea of a re-imagining by taking the very heart of Shakespeare’s ideas and
then entirely changing the context to give the story a breath of fresh air. The
plot, the arcs, and the character traits came from my head, but I worked this
around certain original scenes and symbols that I wanted to adapt for a modern
era with more modern relevance. But it was challenging at times to remember
that I was allowed to stray as far from the original play as I needed to!
Sometimes I would grow really attached to the way I wanted the scene to play
out in reference to Romeo and Juliet, before realizing that it wasn’t
working as effectively for my story, and then I changed it for the sake
of the larger arc.
A lot of academic
reading! To start with, my parents are originally from Shanghai, as are just
about all my family on both sides, and I used to visit the city often in a
pre-COVID world, so I had a general idea about the culture, the history, and
the small little things that you can only really pick up from direct experience
and interaction. Of course, since I was setting this in true history too, I
wanted to make sure I had my facts straight and I had the right vibe. 1926 was
just before the outbreak of the Chinese Civil War, and it was right in the era
of warlord rule, after the imperial dynasty fell but before a true government
was installed. There was already so much going on domestically, and then there
was the foreign influence too because the British and the French held huge sway
in the city after the Western victory in the Opium Wars. While not every detail
I researched made it into the book, I don’t think any of the time I spent in
the library was wasted, because knowing all these historical details helped
guide the atmosphere of the content I was writing. Shout out to my school
library for letting me sit in its stacks for three hours, flipping through every
book in the 1920s China section!
I’m a very visual
writer, so I love to be able to “see” what I’m writing. Setting the scene is
always at the top of my agenda, and that way, the reader can also feel very
solidly rooted into this world I’m throwing them into. When it came to the two
rival gangs too, it was the visuals that influenced how they came to life. I wanted the two gangs to look distinct, and
that presented itself first in the colors (which is where the names—the Scarlet
Gang and the White Flowers—developed from). The more I thought about the colors
they would use to differentiate themselves on their territories, I also started
thinking about the spaces they occupy: the Scarlet Gang operates from a large
mansion; the White Flowers operate from crowded city apartments. The Scarlet
Gang have been around since before the imperial dynasty fell, the White Flowers
are relative newcomers who fled civil unrest in Russia. By first finding a few
core values and traits that each gang values as a result of their position in
the city, I could then expand outward to determine how the gangs operate
differently and what their goals are.
6. You are an undergraduate pursuing a double major. How do you organize your time so you have enough time to write and market your debut as well as do the work you need to in college?
So many to-do
lists! It’s the only way I keep on top of everything, because doing an
undergraduate degree and debuting a book at the same time means there are so
many deadlines coming from so many sides. It ultimately comes down to making
sure I know what’s the most immediately pressing thing on my plate and
prioritizing so that I’m not letting school fall to the wayside when I have
heavy edits or let my promotional content suffer if I have midterms going on.
Sometimes this means that I’ll be working late into the night and writing at
3AM, but it is what it is. I love everything about being an author, so I don’t
mind too much!
7. Your agent is Laura Crockett. How did she become your agent and what was your road to publication like?
I started my road
to publication by participating in #PitMad, which is a Twitter contest where
you pitch your manuscript and agents like the tweet to show interest. I
definitely sort of threw my lot into that, because I had just put the finishing
touches on the earliest version of These Violent Delights when that
pitch contest rolled around, so I figured there would be no harm in doing it,
and cold querying on my own alongside it. The funniest part is that most of my
cold queries were responded to faster than my #PitMad queries! I had researched
agents very carefully, because I wanted to be sure that my book was something
they were looking for, and the sort of books I wanted to write were the genres
that they represented. Laura was the very first agent I queried because my
manuscript fit her wishlist really, really well. Less than a month later, she
offered, I notified other agents who were reading, and I ultimately signed with
her after considering a few other offers because I loved the vision she had not
just for the book but for my long-term career. We also just clicked as
people, which is super hard to explain in words, but it was just a feeling!
After signing, we revised the book, and then it went on submission when I
started sophomore year of college. By second semester of sophomore year, we had
one offer came in, and then multiple, so These Violent Delights ended up
selling at auction to Simon & Schuster.
8. What a cool road to publication story! What are you doing to promote your book given COVID-19? What advice do you have for other authors with book releases?
The COVID world
has forced all of us online, which is definitely the new playing ground for
book promotion now. I’m very comfortable with the internet as a marketing tool
because I grew up on the internet, and I’m always fiddling with something new,
whether it’s making graphics or filming TikToks. My best advice for upcoming
authors in this landscape would definitely be to get creative with what is
within your capacity: the internet arena is huge and it often feels like you’re
shouting into a void, but when you hit your right niche and enjoy what you’re
doing, I promise your audience will come to you.
9. What are you working on now?
I just turned in
the sequel to These Violent Delights! So now I’m working on a secret
project that I’m super excited about, because I can’t go a day without thinking
about some sort of story!
Thanks for sharing all your advice, Chloe! You can find Chloe at www.thechloegong.com, Twitter, Instagram, or TikTok.
If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog and/or follow me on Twitter, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. This giveaway is U.S. only.
Monday, November 16th I have an interview with debut author Rachel Short and a giveaway of her MG spooky mystery The Mutant Mushroom Takover
Wednesday, November 18th I have an agent spotlight interview with Tori Sharp and a query critique giveaway
Monday, November 23rd I have an interview with debut author Carol Coven Grannick and a giveaway of her MG contemporary Renni's Turn
Hope to see you on Monday!
What a great interview with Chloe! Her book sounds simply amazing. Thanks for sharing and for sharing info on the writing workshops!
ReplyDeleteGreat interview - and the book sounds fascinating!!
ReplyDeleteTotally agree - all kids need to see reflections of themselves in books and stories. Magic and mysteries are 2 of my favourite things!
I SO agree with your reasons for writing. You can't NOT tell those stories. Chloe's book sounds awesome - just what I need. I appreciate you mid-grade authors. I encourage my grandguy to read by taking him to buy a book every time he visits - whatever he likes as long as it has words. He reads it before bed then we discuss it the next morning. It's something we both look forward to.
ReplyDeleteNatalie - I love that you write for the enjoyment of it. I think, if you decide to go for publication, that will show up in your writing and make your work fun for your readers. I agree, we need more stories where the adoptees have a good home and an adventure. :) I've met many happy adoptee teens and adults, maybe a few of them have searched for answers about their adoption, but they did grow up in loving homes and they have good lives. It would be nice to see a portrayal of that.
ReplyDeleteI loved the interview with Chloe. I am a Shakespeare fan, but it took me a while to appreciate Romeo and Juliet. I'm always glad to see the story re-worked and created into something new. This book sounds fabulous!
Those are all GREAT reasons to write. Very good point about a lack of representation of adopted children living happy lives in books.
ReplyDeleteNatalie, then you definitely need to be writing those stories so adopted kids can read about a character like them.
ReplyDeleteI love your ideas and thoughts about writing stories about adopted kids!
ReplyDeleteI couldn't place my finger on why? I like to write. But, after reading your post, I guess I feel somewhat similar. I like to get away from the harsh reality of life and enter a world of fantasy, both in writing and reading. I also like mysteries too!
Wonderful interview with Chloe, in fact a great post altogether Natalie.
ReplyDeleteHave a good Novemeber.
Yvonne.
Hi Natalie, the fact that you enjoy writing is one half of the battle won, you will somehow find the time to write because you enjoy it so much.
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Writing for fun--I love that reason. I think I avoided that when I started because--who has time for fun? But I need to revisit it.
ReplyDeleteI love the setting of this book and can't wait to learn more about this culture and time. Thank you for the interview and chance to win a copy. I have this book on my wish list and shared on tumblr: https://yesreaderwriterpoetmusician.tumblr.com/post/633876276543913984/debut-author-interview-chloe-gong-and-these
ReplyDeleteI didn't set out to write for publication, and I'm still scratching my head over how that happened. A whim? Someone said, why not? I'll be interested in finding out what you choose.
ReplyDeleteI'm enchanted by the 1920s in Shanghai. I'm sure this Romeo and Juliet story is one I'd enjoy.
I completely agree with you about adopted and orphaned kids. My only frame of reference are the stories I've read and they focus on the loss. Breaks my heart.
ReplyDeleteI encourage you to follow your instinct and continue writing stories that include adopted & orphan children. Wonderful idea to focus the stories on events with the adopted/orphan kids be normal well adjusted young people.
Grats to Chloe!
ReplyDeleteI love your reasons to write! My MC in my big books has a thing for adopting children. Would I be able to pester you for your input on a 351 word snippet to see if I do proper justice to someone who would adopt a child?
I love that your writing features characters who have been adopted. I never thought about the fact that this group is underrepresented.
ReplyDeleteChloe's book sounds intriguing.
ReplyDeleteTake special care.
How interesting to add a twist to an old favorite. That would be challenging and fun to try. Best wishes with new release, Chloe.
ReplyDeleteWriting because you enjoy it may be the best reason of all for writing, Natalie! Please put me in the drawing for Chloe Gong's book. This is one that I have to read! And thank you for another fascinating interview, my friend! Take care!
ReplyDeleteGreat interview and story idea of an adopted girl as the main character. The kids do need to see themselves in the story. My mother was a foster child, and for some odd reason, the main character in my current story discovers she is adopted. This was a surprise to me so I'm not sure what happens next. Will find out soon. Have a good rest of the week.
ReplyDeleteGood reason to write what you write! As for me... the voices told me to?
ReplyDeleteI write cozy mysteries because I like to read them, and because they lend themselves well to my sense of humor.
Allowing the reader to see the world sure is great.
ReplyDeleteEnjoying writing is the way to be.
Writing what you love to read is the best way to go.
ReplyDeleteThese Violent Delights sounds like an interesting read. I love that it's set in 1926.
What a sweet reason to write :) And wow, These Violent Delights sounds really intriguing :)
ReplyDeleteI love that you write because you want to! I think that's a wonderful reason to write. And this book sounds amazing by the way!
ReplyDeleteHi Natalie! Great to see you still holding down the fort! I'm so surprised to learn you haven't published yet, but that's ok cuz it's not a race. I love that you're writing about adoptive kids--so so important. I hope to read them some day!
ReplyDeleteThese Violent Delights sounds fantastic! See ya around soon. :)
Writing for you is a fantastic reason. Creativity and expression matter a lot. Great post!
ReplyDeleteHey Natalie!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful post. I think its lovely to see how you see writing, I think its about hearts too! Yes, there is scope for so much beautiful literature about kids, who are adopted. Its time we got the right kinda conversations in the main stream. Your blog is beautiful, please keep posting!
Have a great week ahead!
I also love middle grade to read and to write. It's the sense of wonder and humor that draws me in every time. :-)
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I definitely don't think Harry Potter's a great story for kids who've been adopted. My husband was adopted, and it was an unusual situation, so I've thought about writing about it. I love that you have adopted characters where it's not about the adoption.
ReplyDeleteChloe's book cover is lovely. She had me at flapper!
I loved this interview! My grandparents lived in Shanghai in the early 1930's and I grew up hearing about China and surrounded by the beautiful handcrafted treasures my grandmother collected there. I've recently been reading a journal she kept while living there and I can't wait to read Chloe's book and immerse myself in the city during a similar time period!
ReplyDeleteIf there are any of us that thought about writing, Chloe gives us many reasons to get excited about doing just that!
ReplyDeleteWow! An amazing amount of work going on here, both for your own writing and in bringing resources together for other writers -- including that stunning interview with Chloe Gong that shows both her 'path to publication' and her creative process (writing and marketing). And, yes, I agree we need more positive stories about adopted kids!
ReplyDeleteI cannot WAIT to read this one. Thanks for the giveaway chance. kati_z@hotmail.com
ReplyDeleteWow, great interview! I love how you have so much background about Shanghai. Perfect! Best wishes and congratulations!
ReplyDeleteI write picture books because I LOVE reading them aloud to young readers. Preschool and kinder are my favorite target ages.
I will share this on Twitter. :) angelecolline at yahoo dot com
What a wonderful interview and that setting, with Romeo and Juliet influences, just love it. I love that you write because you have a passion for it Natalie and would especially enjoy seeing you publish one of your stories one day. Have a lovely weekend!!
ReplyDeleteHi Natalie,
ReplyDeleteAnother fabulous post! Great interview - as always, and thanks for the conference tips.
You have one of the most compelling reasons to write I've heard in a very long time, and your approach is perfect. I don't need to wish you all the luck in the world because I think you have it by the tail ;-)
Have a wonderful November!
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ReplyDeleteThanks for introducing me to another new author! Enjoyed the interview, sounds like my kind of read! tWarner419(at)aol(dot)com
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun and informative interview. Thanks for that. I will pass on the giveaway. I'm up to my eyeballs in books right now.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this interview!!! (Not entering the giveaway as I am not in the US? :)
ReplyDeleteI've heard good things about this one! I look forward it.
ReplyDeleteAn adopted child that isn't miserable and in constant peril? That would be different!
ReplyDeleteI also like your idea about writing a more relatable story featuring an adopted child. Your daughter is lucky to have you, Natalie! Chloe’s book about a Shanghai flapper sounds like a fabulous read. It’s incredible that she became a published author while juggling a double major!
ReplyDeleteJulie
Congrats, Chloe! I think any Shakespeare reinvention takes guts because it's not easy to put a fresh spin on it, but this sounds fantastically creative. I also like your answer to the IWSG prompt, Natalie. You can bring your personal experience to tell a great story about an adopted kid.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations, Chloe!
ReplyDeleteI love the Romeo and Juliet story so this sounds like something up my my alley.
And Natalie, your reason for writing is so familiar. It's often great to write the stories we want to see out in the world. :-)
Whee! Congrats! I'm super excited about this book.
ReplyDeleteWriteOnCon sounds like a great online conference!
ReplyDeleteYes, I would love to see more MG/YA books about adopted kids. And foster kids!
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ReplyDeleteThe cover of this book is so cool! I hope to read it.
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I've added the book to my TBR after Ruby Rose recommended it -- can't wait to read it!
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