Happy Wednesday Everyone! Today I’m excited to have debut author Dana VanderLugt to share about her MG historical novel in verse, Enemies in the Orchard. It sounds like a fascinating WWII story and I’m excited to read it.
Here’s a blurb from Goodreads:
Set
against the backdrop of WWII, this achingly beautiful middle grade novel in
verse based on American history presents the dual perspectives of Claire, a
Midwestern girl who longs for college even as she worries for her soldier
brother, and Karl, a German POW who’s processing the war as he works on
Claire’s family farm. This poignant and moving story of an unlikely connection
will stay with readers long after the final page.
It’s October 1944, and while Claire’s older brother, Danny,
is off fighting in World War II, her dad hires a group of German POWs to help
with the apple harvest on their farm. Claire wants nothing to do with the
enemies in the orchard, until she begins to notice soft-spoken, hardworking
Karl. Could she really have something in common with a German soldier?
Karl, meanwhile, grapples with his role in the war as he
realizes how many lies Hitler’s regime has spread. But his encounters with
Claire—the serious girl with gentle eyes—give him hope that he can change and
become the person he wants to be.
Inspired by the little-known history of POW labor camps in
the United States, this lyrical verse novel is told in alternating first-person
poems by two young people on opposite sides of the war. Against a vivid
backdrop of home front tensions and daily life, intimate entries reveal
Claire’s and Karl's hopes and struggles, and their growing attraction to each
other even as the war rages on. What are their chances of connection, of
redemption, of peace?
Before I get to Mackenzie’s guest post, I have
my IWSG post.
Posting: The first Wednesday is officially Insecure Writer's Support Group Day.
Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without
fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can
offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all
kinds!
The awesome co-hosts this month are: C. Lee McKenzie, JQ Rose, Jennifer Lane, and Jacqui Murray!
Optional Question: Book reviews are for the readers. When you leave a book reviews do you review for the Reader or the Author? Is it about what you liked and enjoyed about your reading experience, or do you critique the author?
I write reviews to support authors but write them for readers. I only review books I like because I don’t want to be unsupportive of authors. I don’t have time to write lengthy reviews. I only write a few sentences highlighting what I liked about the book. Sometimes I just rate them.
I have good news to share. In November, I reached 10 million page views. I'm really happy that so many followers are visiting Literary Rambles even if fewer people are stopping by and commenting on blog posts. I'm very grateful that so many people hopefully find Literary Rambles a helpful resource in their writing journey and to discover and support authors.
Follower News
I’m including Follower News in my IWSG post today. C. Lee
McKenzie has a new YA release, Rattlesnake. Here’s a blurb: The desert town of
Rattlesnake isn’t a destination. It’s a last resort. When Jonah's sure nothing
can become worse, he discovers Catherine who’s been dead for over a hundred
year. Now, she needs his help. And here are a few links: Website and Amazon
Now here’s Dana!
How Your Writing Community Fertilizes Your Writing
In 2018, I made the leap and began a low-residency writing program. During my first weekend of my first residency, I remember sitting around a table to introduce myself to other new students. We were asked to share a bit about our backgrounds and what had brought us there. Ranging from 20-something to 70-something, we had a diverse set of stories, experiences, and goals. But the one unifying characteristic was that each of us was committed to taking our writing lives more seriously. One person made a joke that she was willing to pay a lot of money to make someone do what she sometimes wanted to do and sometimes really wanted to avoid: write.
I understood this. I was a middle-school teacher and mom to three kids ages 12 and under. Part of the reason I entered a writing program was for its accountability. I deeply desired to write a book, but I knew that was less likely to happen under conditions that were self-imposed and based solely on my own willpower. I knew the burden of deadlines, something that many people are glad to leave behind when they finish school, were just what I needed again.
I completed a manuscript while in my MFA program, which became my novel, Enemies in the Orchard: A World War 2 Novel in Verse, that was published this fall. The enormous gift of mentorship and accountability that allowed me to make my writing a priority is not something I take for granted. And while I learned much in my MFA program about craft and technique, perhaps the bigger gift I was given was the relationships that apprenticed me in how to make writing a life rhythm. While the act of writing is often a solitary practice, words blossom and grow with the fertilizer of a community who provides encouragement, accountability, and necessary nudging.
I have a friend who started as a classmate—we now call each other writing soulmates—who meets me at my computer, via email, every morning. Because of the pandemic, we spent only two residencies together in person. We haven’t seen each other in person for more than four years, and yet we’ve walked together through early drafts, revisions, rejections, and the ups and downs of publishing. We also have journeyed through two cancer diagnoses, job changes, grief, and joy. We applaud each other’s messy drafts, are overly dramatic about the injustices of our setbacks, and exuberantly joyful at each other’s successes. She has earned the right to give me advice and to nag me when I’m procrastinating.
Students often ask me for writing advice, and I tell them to find others who like to write and share their work. But I know this is not simple. Pursuing relationships with other writers, joining writing groups, and being vulnerable enough to show up for workshops is not easy. Finding just the right partner whose life and writing style fits well enough to provide a symbiotic relationship involves equal parts coincidence and grace.
When I stand in front of audiences to talk about my process or read excerpts, I’m aware of all the thumbprints on my work. I see the purple pen of my mentor who prodded me to delete every unnecessary word. I see the exclamation-mark laded email of my writing soulmate after I worked up the confidence to write a scene I was avoiding. I see the pages and pages of research provided by my go-to historian. I feel the prodding of my editor whose wise questions pushed me just a bit further with character development. And I remember my dad’s voice, whose family stories planted the novel’s earliest seeds.
I call my school presentations “From Seed to Story,” and talk to students about the way a story idea is like an apple seed that is planted, which given time, attention, and pruning, can eventually grow into a tree that produces a harvest.
My dad, the apple farmer, uses fertilizer. He tells people that if he didn’t, they wouldn’t want to eat, or even look at, the apples he’d produce. My community, all those whose thumbprints I see all over my new novel, are my fertilizers. Without them, there would be no harvest.
Thanks for sharing your advice, Dana. You can find Dana at:
Dana’s website: https://danavanderlugt.com/
Instagram:
https://www.instagram.com/danavanderlugt/
Facebook:
https://www.facebook.com/danavanderlugtwriter
Twitter:
https://twitter.com/danavanderlugt
Giveaway Details
Dana is generously offering a hardback of Enemies in the Orchard for a giveaway. To enter, all you need to do is be a follower of my blog (via the follower gadget, email, or bloglovin’ on the right sidebar) and leave a comment by December 16th. If your email is not on your Google Profile, you must leave it in the comments to enter the contest. Please be sure I have your email address.
If you mention this contest on Twitter, Facebook, or your blog and/or follow me on Twitter or Dana on her social media sites, mention this in the comments and I'll give you an extra entry for each. You must be 13 years old or older to enter. This book giveaway is U.S. and Canada.
Marvelous Middle Grade Monday is hosted by Greg Pattridge. You can find the participating blogs on his blog.
Upcoming Interviews, Guest Posts, and Blog Hops
Tomorrow I'm participating in the Let It Snow Giveaway Hop
Monday, December 11th I have an agent spotlight interview with Ashley Reisinger and a query critique giveaway
Saturday, December 16th I’m participating in the Dashing December Giveaway Hop
Monday, December 20th I have an interview with author Joanne Rossmassler Fritz and a giveaway of her MG contemporary Ruptured
Monday, January 1st I’m participating in the New Year New You Giveaway Hop
Wednesday, January 3rd I have an interview with debut author Mary Averling and a giveaway of her MG fantasy The Curse of Eelgrass Bog and my IWSG post
Monday, January 8th I have an agent spotlight interview with Leah Moss and a query critique giveaway
Hope to see you on Monday!
I like the idea of our influences being thumbprints. :) Congratulations to Dana!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on ten million views! And big congratulations to Lee and Dana.
ReplyDeleteWow on all those page views! Congratulations! :)
ReplyDeleteThat's wonderful Dana has such a good writing partner.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the pageviews, Natalie.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteYou have just convinced me to purchase and read Dani Shapiro's book, STILL WRITING ...THE PERILS AND PLEASURES OF A CREATIVE LIFE.
I too believe that every good book has the footprints of some good
authors on it. If not, then why should a writer read another author's books.
Merry Christmas and a happy crossover into 2024.
Shalom shalom
Congratulations!!!
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a Merry Christmas!
Natalie, congratulations on your page views! That's awesome!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations to Dana on her novel in verse, too. I think the writing community is a source of good fertilizer and I'm glad I have found a tribe.
Wow! That's a lot of page views! Congrats!
ReplyDeleteBoth books sound very interesting! Best wishes to Dana & Lee!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog. :)
Hi Natalie!
ReplyDeleteLike you, I often simply rate a book (never under 4 stars) because some applications want me to practically write a book in the review section ;-)
Congratulations to Dana! Enemies in the Orchard sounds good.
And Woo hoo! Look at you and 10 million page views! That's awesome.
Have a very Merry Christmas!
Congrats on all the views!
ReplyDelete"I only review books I like because I don’t want to be unsupportive of authors." - I totally adhere to this too! Nice to know there are supportive people out there.
I love what Dana has to say about community. I know I'd never have become the writer I am today without my writing friends, almost all of whom are virtual (I think I've met only Jemima Pett in person, and that was after years of sharing our writing and critiquing each others' work). The IWSG has been an important way for me to connect with other writers.
ReplyDeleteAs for reviews--I love what you say about writing them for readers, but to support writers.
Congratulations to Dana and to you on your successful blog! Hurray.
ReplyDeleteHaving other writers to work with is so important. We can so easily get stuck in our own heads, and it's nice to have other perspectives, especially when we get too close to our own work.
ReplyDeleteCongrats to Dana - sounds like a powerful story!
ReplyDeleteI don't write long review either - but I like to share what I enjoyed :)
@Natalie: Ten million page views- wow! Quite a milestone! Congrats.
ReplyDelete@Dana: A novel in verse is a demanding literary form. And I adore your book cover. It is amazing: emotional, atmospheric, and subtle.
Congrats on your success. I'm so proud of you. :-)
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Congrats on all the views.
ReplyDeleteThar is great when you can find someone who gets it and even if you don't see them in real life it's like they are there.
I've had this novel on my wish list since I first read about it--I love historical fiction and NIV. Thank you for the interview today and chance to win a copy of this exciting book. I shared this post on Twitter, Facebook, and tumblr. I follow both Natalie and the author on Twitter and Instagram.
ReplyDeleteYour response to this question--"write reviews to support authors but write them for readers"--couldn't be more perfect. Isn't that what reviews should be?
ReplyDeleteCongratulations, Natalie! 10 million views ~ That's an accomplishment! Good luck with your new book, Dana. I enjoyed your piece on writing communities.
ReplyDeleteEnemies in the Orchard has a lovely cover.
ReplyDeleteReviews definitely support authors. Even ratings help.
Congrats on your 10 mil page views. Impressive!
I will share on FB and Twitter. I'd love to read this book. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteA captivating and treasure of a novel which would be greatly enjoyed and appreciated. Congratulations! saubleb(at)gmail(dot)com
ReplyDeleteTen million views? Congratulations!!!
ReplyDeleteDana's article is great. This is why you have 10 million views. You're working hard.
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Congrats on that milestone of viewers! @samanthabwriter from
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A writing soulmate - I just love that you have eachother! What a wonderful story and interview. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteFantastic advice from Dana. I wish her much success on Enemies in the Orchard but let someone else win who doesn't have stacks of books waiting to be read. I will though add this title to my future read list.
ReplyDeleteI like your attitude towards reviews—not giving negative comments or reviews. Me, too.
ReplyDeleteWow, congratulations on ten million views--quite an incomprehensible number. I like the concept of writing reviews to support authors but writing them for readers.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on reaching 10 million views, Natalie! That is amazing!!! I always try to write as positive a review as I can. It's rare I would leave a negative review, mostly because if I disliked a book, I probably wouldn't finish it!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Natalie![I am a follower.] Wonderful interview and great advice, Dana. I always love a story that weaves an historical fact that is virtually unknown to many...german POW's in the US is one perfect subject. It's also interesting that the prisoner in the story is from the same town as my mother, Ulm. Small world, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your success, enjoyed the post today. Sounds like an interesting read! tWarner419@aol.com
ReplyDeleteI agree with your reviewing philosophy. I like most books, but if one doesn't really work for me I don't review it.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your milestone. This sounds like a book I will enjoy. Thanks for the chance.
ReplyDeleteInteresting to read after hitting the book. Thanks for giving me a heads-up on this, Natalie.
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